William James

working class poetry // punk rock performance

July 3, 2015

POETRY REJECTION #62/100: One Throne Magazine

Dear William, 

Thank you for trusting us with your poetry. 

Unfortunately, we have decided to pass on these particular poems. "Crest" was strong; indeed, one reader described it as a "page turner on a single page." However, it perhaps could've worked better as a prose poem (or micro fiction at the right market?). The line breaks didn't seem to fit in a way that enhanced the reading experience, but rather may have distracted from the prose. 

Please feel free to share more work with us in the future, we only ask that you wait at least seven-days before submitting again. 

Sincerely, 

George Filipovic 

Editor, One Throne Magazine

Editor, One Throne Magazine 

(Rejection streak: 12) 

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